Essay Beginnings

Thursday, May 04, 2006

Some good samples

By Melissa
"Hello, is that Mrs Tan? I am June's principal. She had been bullied and is now crying very badly." Suddenly, a voice boomed into the phone. "Mum, the big bully Jason pushed me!" shouted June.

By Haema
"I did not do it! I did not do it! cried Ashley who was wailing bitterly. "It was Mike, not me," but nobody believed her. Her teacher, Ms. S. Lin was fuming. She fiercely glared at Ashley who was wiping her tears with a handkerchief. The principal was calling Ashley's mother and she knew that she would get scolding for something she did not do.

By Kerthana
"Hello! Is this the police? Can you please come over to Raffles Girls Primary? We have an urgent matter here?" Mrs B.Lee, the principal said into the phone. June sobbed even louder. She knew that there was no time for apology.

By Sherine
"Hello, are you Mrs Ng? I am sorry to tell you that your daughter, Caterine has been in big trouble lately," said Mrs B.Lee, the principal. When Caterine heard that, she cried even louder. She was so scared that she could not control herself from crying. Her teacher, Mrs Tan stared at her angrily as if she would scream at her anytime.

By Meng Ting
"It is so unpardonable of her to steal money from her classmates and you, as a parent, should be responsible for this." Mrs Lee, my principal told my mother seriously. I sat remorsefully beside her. Beads of tears flowed down my cheeks like a river. Mr Lim stood beside me, with a file held in her hand tightly. Miss Lim was red with anger, but tried to control her temper as she did not want to interrupt Mrs Lee.

By Surya
"A good name is sooner lost than won" seems true to Rachel. She was a very good, obedient girl and teachers have very good impression of her. Unknowingly to others, she had the habit of stealing. She was at it again and this time, she was caught red-handed by Miss Lim. She was ushered to the principal's office and a call was made to Rachel's parents.

By Luo Yang
Each step was taking Jane nearer and nearer to the principal's room. She used her weak little hands which was still shaking with fear to open the door. The door gave a little creak and she was ushered into the room. The principal was using the phone. She felt like a sitting duck waiting to be shot. Each minute passed slowly and she felt very nervous. Soon, she bursted into tears.




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